Writing, songs, poetry.

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  1. Titans Eternal

    Titans Eternal Got the swagger of a cripple

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    Anyone here write? Used to do it damn near daily for years when I was younger. Used to really help, but it got to the point where it was just way too brutal and dark. Now I'm once again hate filled enough to enjoy poetry.

    I doubt most of you can think out more than 2 sentences, but surely some of you write. I'd be interested in reading/posting some if anyone else is interested.
     
  2. Titans Eternal

    Titans Eternal Got the swagger of a cripple

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    I'll go first.

    A cardboard lineage passed through alleyways
    Confused spectators paralyzed
    False idols once condemned now mastermind

    All the while, false reflections in the corner of my eye
    No time left to watch dead men cry
    Often fantasize that beneath the lies lay a better life
    No longer would I need to keep watch at night.

    A constant fear of being alive, but with that comes the calm of knowing I'll die.
    That day I can no longer cry,
    no words left to ask why
    Just a soul and the hope that someone knows why.

    Intertwined with the past, im a sinner im a saint
    A pain so intense I disassociate
    Biased clay memories, preserved and served cold
    as the pain of a mother too far gone to grow old.

    Paraphernalia shrapnel, needles made of candy canes
    Rivers and valleys full of blood and veins
    To feel the throb of your heart, each beat in vain.

    Every word is a paddle up the stream of insane.





    And ya'll thought I just posted pictures.
     
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  3. Gunny

    Gunny Shoutbox Fuhrer

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    Hey diddle diddle
    Titans Eternal is a wimp
     
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  4. Gunny

    Gunny Shoutbox Fuhrer

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    But seriously, I write, though attempting to write a novel. Doubt it will ever get done to the point where I will submit it for publishing but I like to do it and it proves some sort of escapism.
     
  5. Titans Eternal

    Titans Eternal Got the swagger of a cripple

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    well stop being a total pussyboy and post a paragraph or two for us to read...
     
  6. GeronimoJackson

    GeronimoJackson Brainwashed by the Left. Now I am free.

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    Does sexting count?

    When you sext with me, it's erotic literature.
     
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  7. TheSureThing

    TheSureThing Straight Cash Homie

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    damn this thread is homo
     
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  8. RavensShallBurn

    RavensShallBurn Ruck the Favens

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    I had to write a poem for my speech class senior year of high school... it was awesome.

    It was right after the Giants beat the Pats in the Super Bowl, and I did a poem on that. I wish I still had a copy of it. It's probably somewhere in my bedroom closet.
     
  9. Finnegan2win

    Finnegan2win hopesfall2win

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    You can't end two sentences with the same word even if they're spelled differently.. vein/vain & why/why..

    C'mon.. English 101.
     
  10. Clark

    Clark #ShoutboxAlley4Life

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    Oh it's the Internet police.
     
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